Monday 24 December 2012

Write Better Character Descriptions

By Ronald Wilson


Character descriptions can be one of the most enjoyable aspects of writing fiction. There is so much to think about when we create a new character, so its important to keep track of their descriptions.

The first thing writers often think about when bringing characters to life is their physical description. The reader is told of the character's attractive looks, curly blonde hair, and brown eyes. This is great for helping the reader to achieve a view of the character in their mind's eye, but the most memorable characters are those who have special qualities.

The hairless man who is fat around the edges, or the woman with the bags under her eyes and a stray hair under her chin ignite the reader's imagination and allow them a little more fun.

Zadie Smith does this beautifully in White Teeth-- a favorite being the woman from the council who she says 'even on dry days was similar to a long-haired cat soaked to the skin.' Nothing else must be said, and we remember that character vividly in our own creative mind!

Not to say all characters should be over-the-top or strange looking, but adding peculiar details stimulates interest, and creates depth. The main character of course, should be loved by the reader, and it is often helpful to give them typical 'good' looks, as they are memorable for so many other things.

When drafting stories and thinking up character profiles, don't end at physical descriptions. A good technique is to use character profile sheets that omit physical description for the most part. Instead, type the main characteristics of the desired physical attributes into a search engine such as Google Images. For example, type the keywords: tanned, male, strong jaw line, blue eyes, and cap. It's easy to select an image from there that will prompt the imagination. This becomes the vision of the character.

With this vision in mind, it becomes easier to focus on other descriptions that create depth to characters such as: What keeps them awake at night? How do they respond to stress? What do they find amusing? What is the toughest moral decision they have ever been forced to make? And, how is their heart in conflict with itself? These are the real descriptions that bring your character to life.

In addition, experiment with your character before letting them loose in your story. Getting to know characters 'off stage' before they act out their scenes can take things to a completely new level. This brings them to life and adds another dimension to your authentic character profiles.




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